Post by Rantura on Mar 17, 2006 18:40:30 GMT 1
Well here is my story i wrote at school ;D not the best but kinda good 
It's not done yet
Title : Story (
Writer: Rantura (Kathy)
Story:
Once a boy was on the way to school. A car drove by and he saw a beautiful girl sitting in the back seats. After school he went home and saw the car where the beautiful girl sat in, in front of his house! As he opened the door he saw the girl with his mother at the dining table. The girl was sitting on his seat. He said:"Hello" and ate his lunch. His mom said :"So.... Dustin this is Mrs.Marxen and her daughter Jennifer" "Hi Mrs.Marxen and HEEELLLOOO Jennifer". After Dustin ate his lunch he went to his computer. Jennifer asked :"Do you have any good games on it ?" "Well ye but not those ones you like to play."he answered."But you got ICQ or MSN ,don't you ?" Jennifer asked. "H.... ye i do. You can have my number if i get yours." The two traded their ICQ number and got a "pair".After 3 months they had a bit stress and Dustin thought she would leave him but ....... "Well.....Do....hmmmm....... damn i don't know how to tell you." said Jennifer. "Okay I'll make it short do..... do you wanna marry me?" "Wt....i'll have to sleep over it." Dustin answered.At that night Dustin couldn't close his eyes, because he thought of it how it would be to have a family with Jennifer. It was just crazy for him he was only 18 years old. "Can't we do it when we're a bit older?" he asked. Jennifer answered :But.... maybe you'll find a much prettier girl then me and will love her!" Dustin tried to find the right words :"No way you're the ,most prettiest girl i ever saw! I would never leave you !""Oh.... you're so cute i wish all men were like you"
Jennifer returned. Jennifer asked later if she could sleep at Dustin's house because her parents had problems with each other. His mother didn't mind and Jennifer came about 17:00 o'clock. First thing she did was lying on Dustin's bed and was saying :"I love you! Do you love me ,too?" "Of course" Dustin was surprised because they talk already on the Internet about it.Jennifer just asked :"Shall we do it ?" "Shall we do what?""Ahhh..... that's what you mean, but do you have a .....?" "Of course i do! I'm planing this day for weeks."A week later something terrible happened! Jennifers parents died though a Car crash and she had to move to her adopt Family to Bremen(Is in Germany). She visited Dustin all weekends with her new parents. That meant those two couldn't have love any more because Jennifers new parents didn't allowed it.Dustin and Jennifer made a plan..... they had to get rid of her parents. First came the father ,because he drove a motor-bike.Both of them were standing on one roadside with a Fishing-String crossing the road. As Jennifers father came they tightened the Fishing-String and the father lost his head on the road.The mother was a bit harder to kill, because she didn't leave the house since her Husband got killed. Dustin went with her into the library of his brother. There was a big candlestick on the drawer and Jennifer climbed into the sawer behind it. As the mother began to read a book Dustin was talking to her so she wouldn't notice the noise that Jennifer made. Jennifer took the candlestick and threw it down on her mother but...... it missed. Her mother ran out of the room and said she won't die until she knows who her Husband killed. A day later Dustin took toxic of the cupboard of his father because he was chemist. Jennifer and Dustin mixed it under the tee of Jennifers mother.
5min later she died and Dustin's parents found out that the two killed them........Dustin found it out that his parents found out that Jennifer and he killed Jennifers parents so...... they had to get rid of those too.
Dustin and Jennifer built a machine that can kill 3 persons on 10qm. Dustin's room has 12qm so there was enough room for the two to stand. Jennifer screamed and Dustin's parents ran into his room. With out porpoise the used the machine and 265 knifes ran into their body's. Dustin was a bit said but he knew it was right because his parents killed his Grandpa. "Hey we could fly with my money that I got in the bank to Hawaii!"Dustin said. "hmmm...... great idea but what should we do with the dead body's?" Jennifer answered.
Those to little killers had a plan they would cut the body's into little pices so Dustin's dog could eat them. Well ..... didn't work very well so they just threw them into the see.They took a Taxi to the Airport and flew to Hawaii but.... as they arrived there a German policeman called and said:"Something terrible happend..... your parents got killed by a robber!" Dustin just thought if they knew if they knew.
is it great ?
It's not done yetTitle : Story (
[shadow=red,left,300]Love can be that Strong[/shadow]
(maybe)Writer: Rantura (Kathy)
Story:
Once a boy was on the way to school. A car drove by and he saw a beautiful girl sitting in the back seats. After school he went home and saw the car where the beautiful girl sat in, in front of his house! As he opened the door he saw the girl with his mother at the dining table. The girl was sitting on his seat. He said:"Hello" and ate his lunch. His mom said :"So.... Dustin this is Mrs.Marxen and her daughter Jennifer" "Hi Mrs.Marxen and HEEELLLOOO Jennifer". After Dustin ate his lunch he went to his computer. Jennifer asked :"Do you have any good games on it ?" "Well ye but not those ones you like to play."he answered."But you got ICQ or MSN ,don't you ?" Jennifer asked. "H.... ye i do. You can have my number if i get yours." The two traded their ICQ number and got a "pair".After 3 months they had a bit stress and Dustin thought she would leave him but ....... "Well.....Do....hmmmm....... damn i don't know how to tell you." said Jennifer. "Okay I'll make it short do..... do you wanna marry me?" "Wt....i'll have to sleep over it." Dustin answered.At that night Dustin couldn't close his eyes, because he thought of it how it would be to have a family with Jennifer. It was just crazy for him he was only 18 years old. "Can't we do it when we're a bit older?" he asked. Jennifer answered :But.... maybe you'll find a much prettier girl then me and will love her!" Dustin tried to find the right words :"No way you're the ,most prettiest girl i ever saw! I would never leave you !""Oh.... you're so cute i wish all men were like you"
Jennifer returned. Jennifer asked later if she could sleep at Dustin's house because her parents had problems with each other. His mother didn't mind and Jennifer came about 17:00 o'clock. First thing she did was lying on Dustin's bed and was saying :"I love you! Do you love me ,too?" "Of course" Dustin was surprised because they talk already on the Internet about it.Jennifer just asked :"Shall we do it ?" "Shall we do what?""Ahhh..... that's what you mean, but do you have a .....?" "Of course i do! I'm planing this day for weeks."A week later something terrible happened! Jennifers parents died though a Car crash and she had to move to her adopt Family to Bremen(Is in Germany). She visited Dustin all weekends with her new parents. That meant those two couldn't have love any more because Jennifers new parents didn't allowed it.Dustin and Jennifer made a plan..... they had to get rid of her parents. First came the father ,because he drove a motor-bike.Both of them were standing on one roadside with a Fishing-String crossing the road. As Jennifers father came they tightened the Fishing-String and the father lost his head on the road.The mother was a bit harder to kill, because she didn't leave the house since her Husband got killed. Dustin went with her into the library of his brother. There was a big candlestick on the drawer and Jennifer climbed into the sawer behind it. As the mother began to read a book Dustin was talking to her so she wouldn't notice the noise that Jennifer made. Jennifer took the candlestick and threw it down on her mother but...... it missed. Her mother ran out of the room and said she won't die until she knows who her Husband killed. A day later Dustin took toxic of the cupboard of his father because he was chemist. Jennifer and Dustin mixed it under the tee of Jennifers mother.
5min later she died and Dustin's parents found out that the two killed them........Dustin found it out that his parents found out that Jennifer and he killed Jennifers parents so...... they had to get rid of those too.
Dustin and Jennifer built a machine that can kill 3 persons on 10qm. Dustin's room has 12qm so there was enough room for the two to stand. Jennifer screamed and Dustin's parents ran into his room. With out porpoise the used the machine and 265 knifes ran into their body's. Dustin was a bit said but he knew it was right because his parents killed his Grandpa. "Hey we could fly with my money that I got in the bank to Hawaii!"Dustin said. "hmmm...... great idea but what should we do with the dead body's?" Jennifer answered.
Those to little killers had a plan they would cut the body's into little pices so Dustin's dog could eat them. Well ..... didn't work very well so they just threw them into the see.They took a Taxi to the Airport and flew to Hawaii but.... as they arrived there a German policeman called and said:"Something terrible happend..... your parents got killed by a robber!" Dustin just thought if they knew if they knew.
is it great ?
